Not quite up to par...
Very good idea. A backstory to Final Fantasy VI. But, I do have a few pieces of...I dunno...wisdom? to impart to you. Firstly, do a bit more research. After the coin toss, Sabin was never seen until FFVI. Terra never worked for the Empire except under the control of a slave crown. Second, please, slow some of the text. Most people can barely read it. Finally, please work on spelling and grammar. Not being able to understand what you are trying to show the people can be really irritating. But, otherwise, good job.