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cuntinuation? aww man i hate whating!
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It's my first big project and my first submission to Newgrounds. I hope you enjoy and let some reviews so I can do better next time !! I dont know if I'm going to continue it will depend of its success I guess !!
awesome
it was good. needs work... but still it was good. make an other one! NOT BAD
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^^Good Points^^
This was a very cool movie that you made. It's definitely a new concept instead of the average sprite movie. The graphics were nice, cool sprite manipulation and animation too. The music and sound effects were good, as they changed throughout the movie. Looks like it will be a good series if you continue making it.
^^Needs Improving^^
The framerate looked a little bit slow to me, and you should definitely up it to at least 20 next time.
Slock responds:
Thank you for taking the time to review ! I made this a while ago and know I'm done with sprites lol. I am very busy studying but I'm working on something else, and so far I think its better than this one ! When I get some time I will finish it...well thanks again, I worked really hard on that one, thats about a month of work :P
Hoping this series goes uphill.
The animation for when we get to the 'play' button is cool.
Obviously, barely any of the graphics were drawn by you. I didn't mind that fact too much, apart from the fact that it got a tad irritating seeing the Link beside the textboxes with his unchanging expressions, even when he should be scared or whatever. (Is that 'Twilight Princess' Link?)
Anyway, I liked the whole premise and - for me - most of what I was looking forward to was seeing where you took this. So I'm kinda interested in seeing #2.
The ridiculousness of the fight made me chuckle.
The stuff you did draw (specially the arrows) were kinda sloppy.
Us having to click to continue gave it all a stop-start feel. Go to the voice acting forum and ask for folk to voice-act for this. Have text if you feel you really must.
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It was entertaining to watch, but it could really be worked upon a lot. Think more about your sense of comedic timing, bring more creativity to the fore, maybe spend longer drawing what you did and maybe edit some of the sprites when necessary.
Hoping this series goes uphill.
Cool
Improve
You can add different sound effects than the originals but not needed. great job.
Thge storyline is pretty funny and goood at the same time.
5/5
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