not bad

it was ok. the Heinz cat guy reminds me almost of Garfield.

lol

it was fun :D

what

graphics where ok.
style i think i know where you were going with it.
sound ok.
humer I don't know where the jokes are.
Hey keep it up practise makes gooder

Transition problems

Your graphics are good. Sound is good. Humor is decent.

The content needs work. The transition from joke to joke is too fast. First, we're in his house, then we're at the bar, then the elephantman is at the counter. There's no transition between the house, the bar, the counter. It's like reading several different newspaper comics at the same time. They are not connected and it just confuses the viewer. Unfortunately, content is the bulk of the movie.

Anyways, you have potential! Good luck on your next flash movie!