Pretty nice actually

It is a pretty nice movie, very illogcal yet entertaining. Anyway, i think that you should make the script funnier by adding funny things in the middle... This is pretty good the way it is right now too, good job.
>Lidov<

Not too bad.

I saw your thread, so I decided to give your first submission a little review:

That wasn't too bad, nothing great but still decent. The animation itself was average, but worked pretty well with the style of the Flash. I thought the subject matter was fairly unoriginal, but it was still interesting enough to make the movie watchable. I don't know about that fat guy at the end, but it was pretty random, so... yeah.

The sound was ok, though maybe a little low on the quality side of things. I found the whistle loop fairly annoying, so a bit more variety here wouldn't have been too much to ask. The fx for the weapons worked pretty well, but it was maybe a litle too loud (try to fiddle with the volume settings in Flash).

Overall, it did keep me watching to the end, so that was good. I'll give you bonus marks for effort, because I can see what you were trying to achieve. Not bad, just work on your skills a litle more and you should be able to come out with some pretty good movies. Keep up the good work.

Good not great

You could have inproved the funny lines and made it longer

((( HAHA )))

This one made me laugh, almost fell out of my char also, very funny indeed, and nice backround, the characters were cool but could be improved on with more animating of the limbs funny stuff though...

~X~

My p3n0r and I votes a five

.. because I like being different =3