Bad "plot" and poorly executed movie overall.
Your dialogue needs some serious work. Even if I look past the ocasional grammar mistake and your inability to space correctly, the dialogue is just bland. I don't understand why you also couldn't find a font to match the sprites. It just looks tacky using, what? Ariel Bold? I love sprites so much, but I always see them butchered in these movies. At least you didn't try to draw blood in flash to go with your sprites. I have to give you that much, at least.