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my mate wrote it and i made it but it sounded funnyer when we made it please give constructive feedback if ur just gonna flame me in the reviews dnt bother i wont read em
that was pretty damn ass funny i gonna add it to my favourites
im really so tired of people making notes about how long they took on things, or how much effort, and they cant even spell. im not looking for a grammar lesson, but jesus christ, learn the friggin language! if you dont speak english i can overlook things. either way, the first thing about this flash that jumps out is the amateurish nature of it. random sound clips dont count as audio. graphically, you need more practice. ive only been screwing around with flash for a few weeks and all my visuals look cleaner. remember, we dont know you, so your animation is our only exposure to you.. try to make it higher quality.
ok i agreee the gramma is shit, wot can i say i type to fast. But were in any part of my flash or my comentary have i mentioned how much time i spent on or how much effort the closest i came to that was saying it sounded funnier when my mate came up with the idea so before your give someone else a review weva it b gd or bad get ur facts rite.
I thought this was going to be a movie about baseball but instead it's about cricket? Graphics look like they could be better than this. But that's funny though.. they just kept throwing red balls at darth vader.. I wish the story itself was much longer than that though.
its good but i dont think it should get any awards or anything. good effort. its way better then i could do :) i hope for more from you.
i hope ppl will see more of my work aswell.
Good luck on your next one!
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