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this was my first attempt at a flash film

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Good

Nice you know that could make a pretty good movie just out of the story, but i dont know how many who would put out withthe animation. Honestly it was bad. The ships and the gun was acceptable but you have to get a higher frame rate and smoother animation(aspecially on the hair), Pretty good and if you make a sequel ill check it out.

Ugh...

Well, with a preview like that, they'd love you in hollywood, that's for sure.

Your animation skills need to improve, otherwise that was a pretty accurate depiction of any Brand X action hollywood blockbuster that comes out.

It was decent for what it was, I suppose.

Battlestar Galactica beginning

Too much of a Battlestar Galactica feel to the beginning (music from the new series AND the ships flying with the dialogue). Add to that the blatant Predator character it seemed a bit unoriginal. Would like to see what you could do with a little more work on your animation.

No no no!

Jesus Christ God Almighty what were you thinking? No no, I prefer to write it off as a complete ABSENCE of thought that went into this. It's not original, the artwork needs some serious work (I know that I don't do flash, but I've been around long enough to know that anyone can improve), and maybe (just maybe) you could shoot higher on your next flash adventure. The sound wasn't wretched, and the artwork shows some real potential. Practice some more, tweak your style, and DO NOT STEAL IDEAS. We don't like it [idea theft] if it's not a parody.

Rip-off!

What a lack of originality, man.... I identified at least 4 or 5 movies in that: Matrix, Predator, Star Wars, Underword, etc... Please try to find something original, don't just rip-off other movies. I mean the last image was blatantly an "Underword" picture, with the head and hands modified... Geez, that's a big no-no. Keep trying.

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Feb 9, 2005
7:05 PM EST