**UPDATE**
o2.10.o5
Ok i have submited a whole new flash file!Well not really a whole new one its really the same thing but a updated .swf file.
I thought i would give it a try.
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To be honest you lacked then entertainment factor which should nbe associated with movies. All there was was music, a black background the occasional white flash and a bunch of different coloured lines.
I think for future flashes you should include more artistic talent and a plot, otherwise it's just a bunch of randomly pointless lines which just is not really worth watching.
You have no flashes, therefore, you cant fucking call my movie bad. Shut the fuck up and get off newgrounds. Its a FRAME BY FRAME. There IS NO POINT! Look up all the other fbf collabs, its the same pointless shit. Fuck off.
didn't i blam this once before
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No, now please GTFO.
Good job bro.!
Remember me, Creamy_hoor, AKA raysbmbmrm01? That was good... You need to start making your OWN movies now, Kevin.
I have made eight, and you can too.
Lol...thanks man. Yeah i do need to start making my own...i've been being lazy with flash the past two-three months.
Okay
First of all, it was not bad for a frame-by-frame. There was just a lot of little things that you need to fix before you continue on in your flash fbf's...
You need to up your frame rate. It was running slowly, and normal animation speed is 24 fps. Give that a kick. Secondly, you need to learn to utilize the whole screen, and keep the ratio of your objects in focus. You drew tiny little objects for such a large screen, use all those pixels man! Otherwise, it was a good start. Hope you continue on your flash adventures and work on your style.
--jmtb02
Thanks ill try to work on it but you guys know what the sad thing is?I submited this like last month and it got blammed.So thanks all of the kind people out there that vote fair.
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i understand that making flash is hard work and might getr boring, but that was way to short and i saw no point to it
Well i am sorry to upset you and waste you're time.