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Feb 5, 2005 | 1:24 PM EST

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Update: Citista is MLK Jr. I wasnt aware of this because he didnt include his name.
This is Citista's first daily toon appearance.
the 98th Daily Toon to this epic series of awesomeness. But check thisout, 02052005... it's all 0s 2s and 5s. wow. thats entertaining, it really is.
This toon consists of the fine people we like to refer to as Chrome- and Smellypeterson. Martin Luther King Jr. is also making his first Daily Toon appearance, and it sure is a good one! Enjoy.



Rated 1.5 / 5 stars


^^Good Points^^
I liked the many music choices in this one. From Benny Hill to Alice in Chains. Good stuff! I thought Smellypetersons part was wonderful. it was very funny in its awkwardness and quite entertaining.

^^Needs Improving^^
Chrome-'s part was nothing special, though he's not known for special things. And Martin Luther's part isn't that impressive either. I could make something like


Rated 0.5 / 5 stars


Ok, I thought I'd go on and talk about each of you flash and express my view point in the process.

Ok the first one was the only one that had a form of story going for it. from what I see two guys were looking for a treasure, but as an end result couldn't find it, and the fat one sumons a holy ball that grant them a wish....Well...ok, while I see a plot I must ask, why didn't he get the ball up there in the first place. My suggestion would be to plan out some of you plots carefully.

Chrome's Benny Hill: Ok, it's got Benny Hill in it...but why a picture of a dog spinning around? I know it may be just me, but I can find all the funniest in it. I'm more aware of better uses of flashloops that use Benny Hill themes such as the kid the crash his head in the car from looking outside and stuff. i would suggest studing other themes using the same song.

Finally, MLK Jr. I don't exactly understand the concet of that. Mind giving me the idea behind the 2 second bit?

Overall, I suggest studing flash very carefully and keep practing...I know you guys can make good flash sometimes even if you only take a days time to meet your deadline.

Just keep trying will you...hopefully you'll improve.

I have no exprence with flash, but i know practice is a key to everything.

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Rated 0 / 5 stars


Where did you get the preloader? Honest to god, where did you get it? That was a really good preloader. That was the only good thing about this.

But the cartoon...wasn't even a cartoon. Just a bunch of pictures put together in 2 minutes. Takes more than that to make a good flash. Honestly, nobody cares how fast you make these. The thing that people care about is quality. Except for what that one guy said about the mass voters who have no talent in anything whatsoever, and those anime fanboys(I've seen anime, and I HATE IT.)

Why must you make these crap-tastic cartoons? Nobody wants to see a rotating picture for 2 minutes straight. Or some flashy thing going "w00t!" The first one was drawn good.

And in the authors comments you say something about an "epic series of awesomeness". You are the most egocentric group of people in the world. Honest to god. And you know it's crap. What will you accomplish by pissing people off with these? NOTHING.

Just make something good. NOT A PRELOADER. Some good cartoon. And don't come up with some snappy, mean response to me either, because I've seen you guys do that. " You made no flash, I did." WHO CARES? NOT ME.

TheStarSyndicate responds:

So negative!

The only positive thing you said was, "The first one was drawn good." Besides being grammatically incorrect, it's also a little harsh. All of these participants worked hard to make these flashes, whether you like it or not.

I found your review extremely rude.

Grow up.


Rated 1 / 5 stars


that wasnt very good. why dont u guys put any effort into your work?? the only one that was remotely good was the 1st one because it was drawn pretty well and i liked the music. the 2nd was stupid: a rotating picture with some music thats taken off some other flash. the third one is similar to the 2nd one. no animation involved. why do u make these flashes? im sure if u spent more time on them u could come up with something good. like call it monthly toon. but this is crap and i cant beleive why it hasnt been blammed.

TheStarSyndicate responds:

You make something better.

And then come back and give us a zero.


Rated 0 / 5 stars


Please upgrade ur stander of work or dont submit at all.


TheStarSyndicate responds:

Maybe you just have bad taste.