It's Great. Now tweek it.
This is possibly one of the best Poninjas' spin-offs I've ever seen. I assume this is your 'rough draft'? Well, just tweek it a bit, make it longer, and you've got yourself a good flash.
Ohhh, so sweet!
That was Good.
All you really need to do is add some diologue
I gave you a decent score because I liked how it ended. Veyr unexpected. I think you just need some sound, for it to be longer, and for more humor. You'll get a higher score for sure if you do that.
ive seen worse, but it was still pretty ok,
i gave u 5