Okay

It was good for what it was, and you should try to make osmething out of it, no point in wasting it.

could be good.

pretty decent, you could make this into something good if you put more effort into it, the background needs work, and this needs a plot of some sort to it.

Needs work

- this wasn't "very random" - in fact it seems that alot of people are starting to interpret the word "random" to mean "I can't think of a story or plot so I'll string a bunch of non connected thoughts together" which is not random at all - it's the same every time you view it - but I digress...

The tweens: your fades were not done very well - there was ALOT of ghosting on your symbols...

The bus: you made a mistake I've seen several times before - SOME symbols look fine when flipped but not if they have text on them - it's easy enough to copy the symbol, flip it and keep the text the correct way...

The plot(?): NOTHING happened in your submission - Here's the story as I saw it:
Four guys are waiting for a bus. The bus, driven by an undead gargoyle, comes speeding up and they get on it. The end...
...yawn...

Not bad

Note to dzk, this is an intro-it will not have a plot. Mattaku no baka.

what's the point?

no plot, no story, no incredible gfx, a millencolin track... so what?
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