sucked...
All i have to say is man that stunk!!! (i mean im never playin again put more interactivity into it like we get to more the wepons and stab and poke him all we want
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well, ya clicky and kill...not much really left to say......oh yeah;
made this when i got bored and i thought 'hhmmmmmmm...who do i really hate? and it is this guy^^ who shall remain nameless...incase he hunts me down and gives me a well deserved slap.....anyway, took a few hours to make, as i kinda messed up a little and did things the long way ^-^
so anyway, yeah, this -may- or may not be finished, it depends on feedback, so contructive reviews please, i dont want any 'OMFG!!! YOU SUCK! DONT ANIMATE AGAIN! OMFG!!! LOLOLOLOL' or the ones that are just pages and pages of 'die etc', thank you :)
lil-blue-kitsunewulf responds:
Hey yanno, looking back on it, it really does doesnt it =p
Thanks non the less for the review, and i hope to improve on my next animation that i submit
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You appear to be both a furry and a flash artist, two things that don't coincide much. Given that you're one of the few out there, I think you should give your flash videos more effort. Maybe feel a little pride in your work, somewhere.
I don't mean to make it seem like I'm coming down hard on this animation in particular, the other ones of your's I've seen have been blammed before I could write a decent sized review. This was the only place I could leave this.
Anyways...on to the review itself...I agree with a lot of the other people who reviewed this though, in that the poking was the best part. It did get some chuckles out of me.
Suggestions:
*You could have given the character a tail. It'd be easier to figure out what he is that way.
*You could have him say or do annoying things if you don't kill him right away.
lil-blue-kitsunewulf responds:
well ^^: i wouldnt as much call me a furry as such, i tend to loooooath the mojority of furs o.o wich...is odd.....
anywa, nuff bout that ^^;
but yeah, i tend to have really good ideas, then just..lack time to put stuff together so i just put together what i can in the little time i have, i have a life to run yanno :p.......gotta keep ahead of those hitmen too <.< >.>
anyway, thanks dude, i *will* get round to re-making this** and it *will* be *muuuuuuch* better and i will..stop using so many of those star things o.o
so, all in all, thanks dude, for leaving a review that was acctually helpfull and not a load of abuse, so once again, thanks ^-^
**yeah, i still havent got round to remaking it o.o;;
nice
well done, youve finally got something on newgrounds and it hasnt been blammed. great game and i love drawing and the animation
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Ok, so this theme is obnoxious....
...but it can also be funny.
One thing to keep in mind is your audience. It took me a few seconds to realize the target dude was supposed to be a furry (it was, wasn't it?). You need to establish what the character is before subjecting him to anything. The impact of the actions committed isn't nearly as great when you're trying to figure out why you're beating on him.
If you made the dude do and say a few things before the mutilation that pegged him clearly as an obnoxious furry, it would be much quicker to understand. As well, if you don't know what "yiff" means or what a furry is, this just looks pointless. If he did some things that anyone could look at and go, "man, what a loser", mutilating him would be fun for regular people too.
And what the hell is he saying before he gets hit? If you're going to put audio on it, make sure it's easy to decipher.
Clean it up a bit and clarify and you'll have a winning game.
lil-blue-kitsunewulf responds:
ah, okays dude^^ now that thats been pointed out (teh fact of 'what the hell am i killing? etc) i can clean it up a LOT, i didnt want to spend anymore that i allready had on it without knowing what to aim for (i did spend a total of 4/5 days on this to get it up to some sort of standard), but now i know 1.) define the target 2.) clean up audio 3.) leangth need doing over to and to what standard, i will more or less re-do it from scratch to a standard of 'goodness' (if thats possable on here, ya allways get one bad review no matter what you submit)
but thanks dude, for taking the time to point out the flaws of this 'obnoxious furry killing' ''game''. i really do appreciate it :)
very stupid
only a demonic lil 13 y/o with a taste for blood and violence would like this crap