Dang, stop with the hardcore porn on the side of the screens! There wasn't even that much nudity in this. Anyway, this was still great. I'm glad the narrative is so coherent. Granted, that's mostly because you describe the plot in the author comments. Still very nicely done.
It knows how to take its time. I still can't quite remember all of their names. There's just so much going on. That's still a good thing. I like how it all comes together.