Pretty good!
Not a bad job at all, especially for a week-long school assignment. It was fun to watch, and I hope you'll submit more. Nice job at the end, too. :)
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This school assignment probably took my partner(A.T.) and I about a week or so to finish, dont forget to minus the goofing off and what not and you'll get your well rounded number. The thing that sucks is the quality(I was limited to 150 shots cuz of school memory card), but since I had to lower that, no sense in losing sound quality while I was at it, so the music is pretty good. =) This is my first submission, don't hurt my feelings too much now.
Umm, you made an effort (?)
I'm not sure I get it, or if there's anything there to get. You did make an effort & I applaud you for that, but everything else needs work. True your audio was of good quality, but how much thought went into the selections? It didn't really "fit" the video in my opinion. I think if you thought it out more, cleaned up your video (unless that pixelation was supposed to be that way), and smooth out your animation you'll have a much better product. You might try editing to the beat of the muzik where it will fit. Easy does it on the credits, you had them coming & going; they accounted for about 1/2 of the total runtime. Keep trying though, you'll get there if you deserve it.
Sp4ceman-Spiff responds:
Thanks for your review, yah I guess ur right about the audio and everything, but the quality of my video was the way it was because the file was too big, and if i were to really do that, I'd hafta go back to school, during my break, and I reallly didnt want to do that. And the smoothness, my partner and I were only limited to 150 stills just ta let you know, aaand ya lol the credits, we got carried away with that, we could have just put everything by the two of us instead of naming each part. THanks for ur review!
whoa
It's an offspring song. really nice to actually here one of their songs in a flash movie... the clay animation isn't bad.. he went into the toilet.. whoa... and then that was the end.. very strange ending.
I know that bunny!!
YAH!!! I LOVE THAT BUNNY! MASHIMARO IS THE BEST!!! THIS MOVIE WAS SOO COOL, I"VE NEVER SEEN MASHI CLAY-MATED BEFORE!! =D=D
I hope to see lots more from you!
^.^
Yeah! Offspring rocks!
Good animation, just try to make it a little more smooth and that would be great. The best part was the sound >.>
But the movie it's great, just a joke with no compromisse.
- Kael Sorrow
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