why was there a tank in the road block? seamed like a bit much. other then that was pretty good girl still needs to stop being so heroic is really unrealistic.
I like the action in this series. The girl is really clever and strong, I was like "lucky!" when the giant stepped on the robots.
It's certainly a good thing our heroes stocked up on deus ex machina before they left home. :P
This is starting to feel like you're just making it up as you go along, which is most emphatically not a good thing. :P
that part with the motor bikes reminded me of star wars return of the jedi when the scout troopers were riding landspeeder chasing the rebels soldiers on endor
keep it up!