This animation was entertaining, if not a bit short, it good be fleshed out a lot more with planning, the style of animation was interesting and showed great potential for other projects.
A few pointers:
- The use of light was a little extensive if not over used a little bit.
- The scene with the sun setting lagged a bit, but it showed an artistic and thoughtful passage of time.
- Apart from the fact that this was intended to be a purely visual piece, the lack of vocal talent is noticed, and could have been used well here.
Overall it's a nice story. Keep it up. I look forward to your other projects.
This story is a waste of you skills...
Animation and graphics aren't bad. But the story and the whole movie and content are not worth that much work. That's my personal opinion, I was just bored after he left his parents. Another con is that the track didn't really fit the story it didn't work together. I'd rather choose a track wich fits the story than this one because it makes me think of freedom and nature and that aint really what the movie is about...
Sorry for my spelling or other mistakes, I'm from Germany.
Pretty good video you just need to work on making it look like he is walking past the trees instead of them just disapearing and reappearing in front of them character again.
i think it will better if u do something more with this flash. concept & music is good.
That was... deep. Being of a similar backround myself, i found that, mixed with the music, it was up lifting.