Ok... This was a bit smoother than the last one, BUT, you really need to work on the lighting. In my claymations, I use a lamp to directly shine on the characters, and it works fine, but I have to keep it in the exactsame spot through-out the entire movie. So like, for four or five days, it's in the same spot. So the lighting doesn't go wacky. Anyways, I liked this much more than the other one, and just to say, you could do a bunch of practice claymations, and NOT submit them... You could just practice till you're awesome at it, I mean, I did that. I have like, 10 claymations that I didn't submit, because #1, they were practices, and #2, they sucked(lol)... But really good try on this, and that yellow guy didn't look like knox's at all....If you have a good eye, and look at knox's work now, they look nothing alike. Maybe his earlier work looked kind of a little bit simaler, but I don't really see the resemblance too much. I enjoyed this, though. Making a script changes everything... Great job, I'll give you a 5/5, because I can tell you worked hard on it.