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Broken Saints Chapter 7

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After Raimi is striken by the words of the Vagrant, his mind spins out of control and into the black and white haze of the quantum. The visions won't stop now, and God is waiting on the other side of the wall of Code.


The best yet!

I can certainly see why people have a hard time understanding this one. Not only do you use metaphors, but you use metaphors for pretty advanced metaphysical and epistemological concepts. Hell, even pretty advanced physics and politics and the like. Most people wouldn't get it even if you just presented it straight out of a textbook... the foundations for the concepts haven't been laid out yet in their minds.

I certainly don't think that you should be expected to build everyone's educations, though. At least some people get it, and some of the people who don't get it realize that there is still something to get.

Far from random words slung together haphazardly.

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I shit myself rotten I liked it that much.

good as usual

like the others strange and kinda creapy


Where the hell do u get this stuff so confusing yet so true?


I think that is quite possibly the best one so far!

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3.95 / 5.00

Jan 7, 2005
3:13 AM EST