It was interesting to say the least.
I liked it. I thought it was very original. The commercials were funny. At the end you should put a replay button or something. I didn't even know it was the end until it looped. I think people will enjoy this if they just take it for face value. You know? Not focus on a storyline or plot, not focus on laugh out loud funny. But just watch it and be amused. It isn't great but it isn't bad. Its above average I would say. I suggest that somewhere in your author's comments you put that people should not take it seriously and expect alot but just take it for what it is. On a lighter note though, I like your style. The script was good and the way you would cut to different things and the commercials again were a nice touch. Keep at it. I look forward to your next project. Have a good one.