Not bad, but it could've been better

The graphics on this were good enough, but the animation could use a lot of work for the most part.
For example, the way the characters walk looks just horrible... it isn't fluid at all so it just seems like a sprite who moves over the screen.

The music was avarage mostly... but that's more because it loops so much, it got annoying.

The story is pretty interesting though, and it's this flash's best aspect.

If you work on some of the points in this, this could become pretty good, but untill then it'll only get an avarage rating.

THAT WAS GOOD

THAT WAS GOOD WHAT THE HELL IS RHYNN TALKING ABOUT OF COURSE YOU SHOULD MAKE MORE OF THESE THEY ARE BRILLIANT.

Not bad!

I think you've a great plot going on, and that's what kept me interested. The sprites, well, could use some work, though the music was timed and perfect for each scene. I will gladly see your upcoming episodes, keep it up.

uh...

Not trying to be mean, but that was not a very good film. I found the opening prologue to be a bit drawn out. The music during that was decent though. I don't really think you should do any more films in this style. However, this would make a decent game. Maybe that is what you should look into.

well

it would be alot better if u made it into a gam and a lot longer, but i think are on the right trak tho, keep it up