i didnt exactly like it at all really....
Exactly? An odd choice for an adverb.
very weak story almost fell asleep
I don't know what else to say other than I didn't like it at all
Nothing funny or interesting about this.
I don't get the ending
ha, seeing as that's just plain immature and callous, it's not funny, so it's completely unneccessary. so you're saying "god" was originally going to make women as a pleasure pet for man, but man was stingy, so he got US instead -- boring imperfect whores that we are, hm? very nice.
I'm very sorry you are offended. It's just a joke. Nobody should take it seriously. My intent was to portray Adam as a fool, and
after all, he represents us guys!