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Second collection in this series.


Enjoy.


-Sincerly NLowrider

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Heheheh..

Wow, you do a great voice over. Thats a hilarious short, and the game was.. well.. lets leave it at that. But the wrong choice was pretty cool.

What is this?

I don't know whether to laugh or cry at the extremely small amount of effort put into this.... thing. It is the purity of awfullness (by the way this is whilst i am giving you the benefit of the doubt).
This is really really bad, go back and try again and please don't infect newgrounds with videos of this bad quality again.

Masculine responds:

Hey if you want to do something better, your welcome to submit to Newgrounds any time.

pfff

What is this paint?
Terrible!

Masculine responds:

Pff, no it's not paint. Obviously if it was there would be pixals, not curved lines.

Your terrible!

lacking

I will discuss this submission in two parts, first, the movie.
I really understand that syncing the mouth with the words is a PAIN IN THE ASS, but it can do a lot for the video if you do. The audio was also very dirty, and hard to understand, i don't know if you need a new mic, or if you just need to not talk so close to it when recording.
as for the game... it struck me as taking up bandwidth, i am sorry, but i am just being honest. I am assuming that the antagonist is the father of the main character... though this distinction is never made clear. In the future, build up some sort of story. Also, the head on the stick body just... didn't work. Many stick cartoons have been very successful in the past, this just wasn't one of them. Also, there was next to no challenege in the game, all you had to do was hit space repeatedly until three objects were thrown, and tada! you won.
Please don't get discouraged, just chalk this one up to experience and move on to make new and better flashes.

Masculine responds:

442.4Kb isn't even taking up bandwidth, but yeah it should have been more challenging.

*BUZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ*

bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad.

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Uploaded
Dec 24, 2004
1:45 AM EST