Over Dose Done, this, allthough very odd, was a fantastic flash, great art work, great sound, and great oddness. good work.
This is an above average piece no doubt...
Although it seems abit short...
I feel this doesn't get the scores that it deserves because you have to watch the other Marcus Peblo toons to really apperciate this.
But still, not bad at all.
....That was.....retarted....but evil!....still retarted. Better luck next time buddy.
My god what the hell
A few guild lines,
Clear Story Line
for shows that are series there should be enouge length, diaolge and and clearity for the watch to understand what the hell is going on without having to go back, if you need to do the thing where is says "currently on ..." or "last time on" something like that and review the last episode or what is going. Only if you need to do that though!
Your animation is good, but you seriously need work on your plot skills. Either your movies go on forever and make no sense, or they're too short and still make no sense. I think you need to invest in a guide of how to end stories properly. Even chapters.
I seriously don't understand how the crap your stuff ends up on the front page.