i thought it was gonna be a goofy flash at first...but MAN was that bizzare....
You cannot make a flash reling on art alone.
I believe the summary sums it up well enough. I loved the art work, it was very creative. But your story...where's the organization?
I thought it was a really well animated and drawn cartoon, but WTF just happened. I am so confused. Can you make a flash that isn't just plain wierd and confusing?
I have no idea what I was just looking at.
Really. It wasn't bad though. I liked it. I believe that you could do without the intro though or provide a skip button. It was unnecessary. I also would say it is safer to act like this had no intended story because most people won't get it. I sure didn't. I mean there was a naked boy and fire/leaf thing. Then you got your kung fu gremlins and that key. The screens with Marcus Peblo popping made him look like Mr. Lemonhead Lastly a wizard who is a fan of Homestarrunner. It was pretty random Your style of animation isn't bad. I liked it. I don't think you should change that. The main highlight of this is...the music. I thought the music was great. So, keep doing your thing there. I hope you have much success with your DVD and I look forward to your next project.
what in earth was that???
Seriosly, if u gonna spend several hours of ur day makin somethin, at least make that somehow, i dont get bored and close the window after watchin for 2 minutes :P