oh well this was really abrupt from the way he did the first episode, but that's if you need some writing in the next episode!!!
Super Smart Man must save the Day!
oh well this was really abrupt from the way he did the first episode, but that's if you need some writing in the next episode!!!
Cartoon was good but it felt like it just ended out of thin air you need some better writing next project
Nothing much to it.
You have a mildly interesting cartoon that ends abruptly, with absolutly no character development, and a plot that is quite thin. I recommend that you spend more time on each episode, and introduce your story and characters.
good but the little boy thing didt work out
i quite liked that but it was a bit short and needed a better story line
Not poppin'
The story line wasn't great, neithe was the sound. The lil' boy thing just wasn't working either. I don't know about this series getting big unless you improve on it, a lot. No offence or anything, but I didn't like it.