((( NICE )))

Well notbad, it was cool, the sticks could be somewhat better with more detail on them some eyes and more face features, you could also improve this by making the rounds longer, but this was a good start introducing some of it, i hope to see the next one soon....

~X~

yay

wonderful.

Ummm, WTH?

What the hell was that? Is there any hidden point to that shit?

i dont know

you used shading pretty good, but the words were so dark i didnt even notice them for a while

wtf?

This had nothing to do with the title.