Hey, Zoley-dude. Good to see more from ya.

It's been awhile since I last reviewed a Zoley flash of yours... Maybe since August 2004? Anyway, point is... I HAVE noticed you submitting more of them, and I will get around to reviewing them all. For now, I'm starting with just this one.

As a remake of your original fucked-up Zoley-in-a-cave goes-insane-and-kills-other-Zoleys... this is a great success. While the song you used isn't quite as INSANE as the original Zoley flash's song... it's quite groovy in its ambient technoishness (you credited Fruity Loops... did you make it all yourself with that program? If so, you did a bang-up job, man).

Now, the main difference here is... of course... the colour. Lots and lots of it. In some ways, Zoley being in a purely black and white world works better for mood, but I think you used colour pretty well. Good job with the guns and the backgrounds and the butterfly and everything. I was expecting him to kill it, BTW, but he only killed fellow zoleys. Interesting. He clearly only hates his own kind. Curse you, Zoloft! #;-}>

Pretty nice work for just 6 hours.

Although I think you could have spent more time on it. First off let me say that I found it to be pretty original, you don't see many other flash with zoloft parodies. And that's a good thing, finding something new to make a flash about shows you have some creativity. But it could still stand for some improvement, preferably in the graphics department. You could probably use some more work in backround design, that would be nice. Also your animation did get a little off sometimes, always make sure it's nice and smooth. An example is that every now and then that butterfly wouldn't move in a constant path and would jump off a little bit. Also, on one of the cops when the character walked by after shooting him the blood just disappeared. The music was soft and eerie, a very good choice for the mood, it really enhanced the flash. You could have done some more with sound effects though. Also, something I always like to get on for people. Just because it's a flash doesn't mean you have to limit interactivity to a mere play and replay button. A quality toggle, and pause feature are always a nice thing to have. It was somewhat funny, but a bit too serious looking. Overall I think it was pretty good and I hope to see more works from you in the future, never give up.

uhm...

remember me I'm one of the guys who was badmouthing your cartoons. then you wanted to see what I could do in flash. Well i've had one out for a month now. So go check it out it's called suicidal depression. And I'll let you be the judge of whos better.

oh and also I'm in school too. and not even in highschool. so don't think your age has anything to do with your skill.

((( NICE CHARACTER )))

Yes i have to say i do like the character and nice design about the character, i would suggest make more episodes, with new styles of adventures and maybe some comedy, but its looking good, make more soon...

~X~

not bad

it was good.