It was too long

IT was to long it got boring after 3 min. But you did a good job

Stylish.

However.

I just couldn't get into it. The plot was well worked out, and of course we can all see where you got the ideas and inspiration from, it even says so in the credits which is good to acknowledge. For me it was just too drawn out and slow moving and the graphics/animation wasn't good enough to hide that. If there had been more going on, more things to look at in the scenes perhaps then it might not have dragged so much, but the graphics and animation were very simple and so I found myself rather bored.

I liked the cinematography though, and the music fitted very well with the storyline. Good work,

-Ed

Nine minutes?!?!? That went fast!

Graphics (8) - Not the best graphics, but exceptional animation!

Style (10) - I absolutely loved it!

Sound (10) - Perfectly appropriate sounds! You even changed them for new characters.

Violence (7) - Some guns, violent threats...I like...

Interactivity (7) - Lots of choices, buttons and such.

Humor (0) - Mostly a serious animation. I didn't laugh...lol, although the mouths were kinda retarded...

Overall (9) The original average was 7.33, couldnt stand that. I recalculated it, excluding the humor and I got 8.4. I haven't broken the 'average' technique yet, but I'm afraid I have to. This was way better than a 7.33. I'm giving you a 9 because it kicked an unimaginable amount of ass! I can't wait for the next episode. If it was all one episode, you'd get a 10. It's the suspense, and ending kinda in the middle of nowhere that got you a 9. It's really no problem though. Plus the mouths, lol, I don't know why, but they look funny talking. If you also fixed that, you'd get a 10 from me.

HAHA

yes you get 10 humor points for making the mouth retarded

i couldnt keep watching it i laughed so hard i accidently clicked the [X] no wait i think i clicked cause it sucks oh well

wow, incredible!

you have a directors knowledge of film. the cutting, the scenes, it all fits with what i'd expect for 10.30 at my theater. great job, one thing though ,and its really annoying. their mouths jsut keep moving without regard to the words. like especially the first time with dezer, its hello, but his mouth moves to form like 8 different words.... otn animate it out if you dont watn to, but at least cut teh loop off for the shorter phrases.