Well, could be better.
I know, you're new to SWiSH... was. I don't know how much you've advanced now. But I've seen your recent Flash work offline and it dazzled me! You got to get to work man, I know what you're capable of!
Author Comments
Finally My second flash movie. i thin i have a good vocabulary for a 13 years old. anyway the serie is too long to make it all in one so i split it in parts. Hope you like it and don't blam this ur gonna regret it if i stays here ill continue the serie and no worrie whats coming up is 10X better than this!Now Enjoy!
well made,but no action
i gotta tell it! it wasn'T bad but there is too much blablabla and not enough action!!!!!i think you missed the scene when chrono is kind like zomming with the castle but whatever,i hope your second movie will have more action
((( DECENT )))
Well notbad its cool, and only your second flash, it has a sorta style to it, also made me laugh somewhat, i liked it nice work, keep it up...
~X~
Shining-Darkness responds:
thx for the review evemr if the note is as charming ;)
HRM
But why mario-themed?
Shining-Darkness responds:
youll see in part 2
A good start
You've got potential here, and there is definite story-line possibilities, but the sprites need a little work (such as keeping white areas white, especially on Crono).