ok well not bad for your first film,, maybe make abit longer next time though...
well, clarity is important, nice work though, although I have no idea what was happenning... I personnally like that song, which by the way is "One Step Closer" by "Linkin Park" if you want to put it in the credit's of your next movie, either way, it was a good movie, and maybe in the next one, you should clear it up a little bit...
Cool graphics, slick transitions, but WTF?
I think my one line summary says it all. I loved the transitions, the animation was cool, but what the hell was going on? Plus, EVERYBODY uses that audio track. Still, I liked it, and it was awesome for a first time.
Your idea kicks ass. the narratiob kicks. You need graphics. That's it. get help if you need it, i don't care. It's obvious how awesome the cartoon can be with time. And for your first movie!. Damn dude, I like. I gave you the 9 for story and the fact this is your first.