I think you have a bit of a problem...

I think that you have issues with either following through or having enough time to do anything, it looks like you're capable of doing good animations but you never finish anything. I'm sorry but I'm only going to give you a 2/5 you can put much more effort into this.

watashiwa? i am huh?

are you japanese? anyway um no. this should not be on newgrounds .com its not finished. there is no plot barely any story its a good start but theres no midle or ending......... well good job on the graphics but realy. it should have been blamed

wai... ;_;

Tres depressing, not that I wanna be a photographer but it just was. This looks unfinished to me... don't give up on this movie because you feel like you can't do it or there's no point, you were really onto something, but what exactly no-one will ever know unless you finish it...

i was touched....

this is the first inspiring short I've seen yet in NG...
dude, i dont know that to say.... it was just...
sad....

Life is nothing if we don't move on...............

You did pretty well on this. I would recommend putting a play button at the beginning. Having dial-up, it had to stop a couple of times for me because it started playing on it's own before it was finished loading. I would also recommend extending it considering it just stopped the way it did.