I think it's pretty good for a first submission. I like the idea that you still have to pay atention or miss stuff. I makes the game seem like more then just a slide show.
If anyone put's you down jus't shrug it off, you've got some poential here.
lets see... well, art coulda been better, you coulda improved the humor, and i hate it when you hafta start over... haha. well, anyway, good work, and dont listen to the people who criticize you for making a hentai game... its just a genre, put it that way... aite, well, good stuff, keep it up.
Good for first try
Pretty good but work on the art work some more
really good game make sequal
It's not that you're sick for liking hentai.....
It's how cheap hentai is, personally making hentai games is just the cheapest and desperate way to get a high score and a shot at getting the flash to the front page. The drawing looks like that you traced the anime girl. Another cheap move.
and please, 12 fps is a bad frame rate, use 24 fps or above. Just trying to be helpful.