Meh

Nothing really flawed about it apart from the general plot for the flash. Work on your story-telling-skills (?) and you'll be great.

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Art, graphic style & colour theme all look good. End was funny. Not bad at all.

jessica simpson lol :-)

oh man that was funny

Yeah...

If you're having problems with the pre-loader all you have to do is right click..and then press play...

dumb

well, it wasn't so bad, but be serious next time you make a flash animation because you do have some talent.