Fake Metal Feelings

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Not really that satisfied with it. Was still struggling with drawing techniques and storytelling when i made it. It became an important piece for the rest of my work though


nice work

nice drawings and stuff good story line


Poor thing. It was a great flash. Keep it up!

wow. good work on this

Your symblomism and interpretation of how discrimination is and how victims of it feel is spot on. A very deep flash with a deep feeling. Although not the best flashes graphics-wise,but definitely one of the best flashes story-wise. Cant wait to see more of your animation!


make alot more isak asimov was a genius and you are up there witht he best aswell i mean people who make flashes where the soul purpose is trying to get blammed should see how productive their time can be

it was a good movie but to be honest wit u....

u are a better artist than u are an animator. the movement was filled with choppyness, and it looked unreal (not just the robots), and when people moved the lack of changng body parts its annoying. but i digress, still worthy of a 4. work on your animating skills, with love : D

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AloneInTheDark responds:

I agree. In my animations so far i always placed concept and idea above the actual animation. I never focussed on visual style or animation as much because i didnt find them very important. However, right now im working on a project that requires good animation and sweet looking visual art, so im planning on doing the actual animating with passion this time.

Id like to see how far i can go, because if i put effort and passion in it, then i really can animate quite well. Not to sound cocky, but thats what i think. I feel that all the work i made so far which relies heavily on expressing and concepts paid off more than if i made work that only concentrated on improving my animation skills.

I think i understand now alot of what works and what doesnt. Things about timing, technique and how to expres ideas are factors you only learn by practise. By understanding the basics of these elements, the step to make a well animated short that can ALSO benifit from the previous mentioned learning experience is very small. It will probably take me longer, but time will tell how my next project will come out.

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4.17 / 5.00

Oct 27, 2004
11:38 AM EDT
  • Daily Feature October 28, 2004