where too start
its way too short and well the sound was kind off soft so soft i had to turn to max volume to hear them with out pushing my head phones to my ear but it was kinda cool
Author Comments
BW shorts often involve other character's side of the story, kinda like same time different place, also it's a goodway to use new technics on photoshop, for those who want to see Episode 1 just go to other submissions by Blackan, Enjoy :)
now the first one still dont make sense
lol jokin yeh i looked at the second 1 first :S this is good except for the fact that the sound at the begining and end is poor, it sounds like you have your mouth right up against the mike and your talkin quietly, if you get what i mean. Danny
Blackan responds:
Yeah I get ya, this Movie is Old and I did Improve during the year :)
Oh the moon
I really liked how you did the moon. Your fights need a bit more action, the characters don't realyl seem to fight even though they should be fighting. I think if you could do that with your characters it would improve things a lot. Add some more animatino is my basic suggestion.
I don't mind the short,since you said it was short.
I saw this when it was submittted, decided to come back check al l your work out. Hope to see more.
Blackan responds:
Thanxs for looking at my other Work :)
Getting Better.
Some of the sounds were abit annoying like the wave sounds in the background when Brian speaks, Could use more violence, heheheh... It it were longer, I would have given more of a vote mate.
Blackan responds:
Thanxs Ltninbolt :D
((( NEEDS WORK )))
I like all the different colors used but the characters and backround need more detail, and maybe remove the black outlines for a better effect of it all, but it was a cool flash for what it was, hope to see more soon...
~X~
Blackan responds:
I know, I know, yes there will more soon, you just ganna have to wait,