I have to admit, my eyes were watering a bit at the end. The switch between drawing styles was very effective in showing Jeremy's thoughts vs the real world. Also, I don't think it would have felt the same if you hadn't had added the period in the title. ;)

The only reason I took off that .5 was because of the scream at the end. Wasn't needed, and like most other people said, kinda ruined the mood. Other than that, great little animation with tons of emotion!

A Beautiful Piece of Work

Very touching. You almost had me tearing up a bit at the end. The thing at the very, very, very end before the title screen comes back up was completely unnecessary.

Wow.

Very well done. The animation was pimative at times but that just added to the creepy factor. I love how the story was told backwards. The fact that you didn't have them say anything yet, made a relatable character really shows your skill in storytelling.

Nice

It was a nice film. The art style, obviously very gritty maybe needed some more detail and control. The music flowed perfectly with it.
It was sad to see how everything led to his current state.
You created a very nice short movie.

Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Keep it up