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EgoCity Chap IV

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I made this in my free time cause I felt like continuing the EgoCity since Chapter III got me my first daily trophy. I read the past reviewers so I'm making this movie focusing more to the story instead of the fighting. Anyway Enjoy

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This is a story...

That blatantly ripped off FF10's beginning... xD Other than that, i thought it was a nice improvement in character development in comparison to your other flashes. But please, READ THIS, the problem i had with your other flashes wasn't just lack of character development, it was the realism and execution of your plot. I mean, come on... three orbs of power that, for whatever reason, fall into the hands of various kids?? Not only is the whole "orb" aspect of your story corny (if you really think about it...) but you don't even give a real explanation as to where they came from, why they were made, or how the people that found them learned HOW to use them. Yes, the characters were lacking definition as well (which you tried to fix in this flash) but i'd much rather get some story and setting depth first, before the characters. (More originality wouldn't hurt either...)



NICE MAN!!!!

nice work!!!!!



Awesome

The series is awesome, but u should add more affection to when they are angry.



Good.

Everything was amazing excpet for the voices. Everyone seemed to have a speech impediment and absolutely no inflection.



voices...

All the voices have the same speech impediment... get some friends to help?


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Uploaded
Oct 16, 2004
11:19 PM EDT
Genre
Drama
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  • Daily Feature October 18, 2004