Work on it dude...
I have no idea what you were trying to say in this film, but this just had no real point to it. I'm serious.
Author Comments
Um, wasn't really going anywhere with this one in peticular. I just decided I was going to make a cartoon. This is what the results were.
I also lie at the end where I say everything was done by me, cause it wasn't, after I finished making the credits I added a preloader I got off of http://www.flashkit.com. Everything else *Eeeeeven the music* was me though.
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Update: Wow, what a great fucking response this has gotten. I don't understand what it is that these people don't like, because all their dilect can conjour up is "THHIS FUCKAING SUICK!@@@!!! FUCK Ayou asshoel!!". I will make another cartoon, so outragously fucked you will NOT be able to say this. Plus I will address the real comments stating what really IS wrong with it. IE, BG and such.
it wasn't that bad..
you just need to work on better plots. draw attention with character, people who speak or sumthing. you have potential for a great flash but you only need to work at the animation and the plot line (if nothing else just the plot line, good animation doesn't always equel good movie)
this gets a ten in humor cos it was so bad its fun
how the fuck do you misspell "disappointing?"
datalite-9 responds:
I blame the school system.
So I blame Canada.
Shame on you Canada; you have left a child behind...
I'm kind of...
Disappointed in a way, from the title I thought it was gonna be some kind of comedic cuss out type thing, turned out different.
datalite-9 responds:
Sorry, I don't believe in comedy. Well I do, I just can't write it very well.
well....
i liked the gun that was it
datalite-9 responds:
What? The big gun that looked like a cock? Figures.
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