good.......but.

thats good but a good thing would be to show how the shading is done like showing the layers and how you draw the hair etc. that would make it better

Good.

it waz Good ive seen way better but still itz good. but still keep practicing and make another one of these!!!! OK try doing the next one without coloring cause manga looks way better without color and practice shading cuz the shading u did was ok but it didnt make sense with the hair and the body's shading going different ways and stuff. OH AND NEXT TIME ADD THE FULL BODY AND CLOTHS!!!! ok ^_^ oh 1 more thing the dragon ball z ,trigun, etc hair DEFIES THE LAW OF GRAVITY LIKE OHMYGOD ALREADY DONT USE THAT KIND OF HAIR!!!!!!!! (P.S. sorry for yelling at u ^_^)

hmm

the music seems a little annoying.. but the concept is cool. I hope this helps some of those very active flash artists out there.

There isn't too much need for this

There are websites that'll teach you skills better than this flash. I think perhaps it needs a "Build your own" feature?

'tutorial style', wikid

not too bad, son. nice and quick, but good.