good man, try and improve some.
and as you said the music isn't the best, but the best improvement you could make would be backgrounds. Still, nice job. Fight the power.
A 5 because...
The story is good. It's way too long though, gets boring after a while. Good work nonetheless.
Loved it enough to keep it around thanx for the entry maybe try adding voices but that all depends on if u feel like sorta changin the style of things a bit the music was kewl tho good and thanx