This is only two hours of work. I want to get some feedback. COnstructive critism only please. I know the animation sucks, but I want this to look retarded.
Not too bad. Not too good either.
The introduction was funny, everything else (maybe except the joke with gandalf getting high) was not. You wrote that it tok 2 h and it certainly looks that way.
My advice is: Either make longer more graphicall and audio enchanced flash, or make it more funny if you go for short ones.
Overall its not that bad, maybe its just not my type of humor.
ok
Author's comments:
This is only two hours of work. I want to get some feedback. COnstructive critism only please. I know the animation sucks, but I want this to look retarded.
My comments:
It didn't look retarded, at least not in my eyes. i liked your efforts. if you want my constructive critism, all i can suggest is check out the audio portal for sounds/music and spend more time then 2 hours on a flash.
Really Good
A very funny flash with an especially excellent introduction
Another LOTR ripoof copy type thing
That was stupid and a waste of time
Wow...
Anyone can tween pictures fading in and out, but not only that... the whole thing was a mess!