It looked OK graphics wise, but the sound really needs cleaning up on this. One of the things that lowered the humour score is the fact I couldn't always make out what the characters were saying.
The voice recording also had a lot of air pops in it. There are a couple of ways to fix this, either get a pop shield (a circular bit of foamy cloth that sits in front of the mike) which stops it, or test the distance of the microphone by saying the phrase "This papaya tastes perfect" and keep moving the mike further away until the pop has gone.
I look forward to seeing more work from you and I think that if you clean up the sound I would certainly grade you higher.
What the heck...
What the heck was that?! It was absolutely pointless! I mean, it probably took you a pretty long time to put it together, and it does look nice, but the jokes and stuff were really lame and repetitive. Absolutely dumb. Blam this crap.
keep at it.. its a bit... tweened for my tast with the wobblyness.
oh and btw are those the mouthes from penny arcade!?
ah well you know...
They are copies of the Bonus Stage lipsync
graphics aren't the best but it's nice to see a drawn series on newgrounds. animation of the mouths look good. Voice acting needs work. If the voice acting was better then the movie will be funny. But the movie has potential. So i hope you continue making this series.
Thank you very much!
i like it, but i think my brain has melted, it seemed to never stop, was intereting though
Oh, the medical ward for melted brains is to your left...