alright
some scenes stayed for too long like the boat, but other than that it was okay. i'm not sure if the music fitted, maybe something spookier?
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I made this a year ago, was going to become a animation of a story I wrote, but in the end I just left it as a story, and the title wont mean a fing unless you read the story, so i just want to know what people fink of the animation, even though its basic, as i'm going to submit some proper, better stuff very soon. check my website, at some stage soon, its under maintenance soon, and watch out for my new series of stuff 'Tales of the Beyond World' Please review this, so i know what you think, thank you!
Interesting!
I liked it! for a trailer though, I think you could have shortened it... You know that a trailer isnt all it could be if people start to get bored, and I think the one spot in particular you could have shortened was the visual of the boat. The lightning was cool, and the waves were kind of cool too, but it felt like it lasted over 15 seconds! Which is okay, I suppose, but for a trailer usually things are a little faster paced maybe... Also, to tell the difference between your plot and LOTR, you might have wanted to include a couple of plot specifics so people know more of what it is about... I definitely think the wizard should know kung fu (he sounded like keanu reeves when he said back, foul demon!). Anyway, overall, I liked it bunches. Very nice
RIPOFF
A story you WROTE?!!!!! Thats amusing
samoncreations responds:
I have the file to prove it if you don't believe, and those of you that say the story is like LOTR, then I'm afraid your wrong, the story is not like LOTR at all. You will be able to view and read the story on my website very soon.
hmmm
yea, the white wizard, the eye of sauron, it does remind me of a spin off of LOTR
lol
it looks like LOTR for some reson music was cool but it needs better grafix lol no offence
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