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Rapid Eye Movement

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My cousins first flash so hope you like it. Its done in a comic book fashion with no voice overs just textual it does have music and Sound effects. Its about a man who has been sentanced to deathrow for a murder he cant remember committing

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I'm A Little Confused

I don't really know what to say, or how to feel. I mean, were the real crime scene photos necessary, I mean, like there are pics from movies and stuff too of the same stuff. Why was the pic of a dead guy if he killed his wife? Also, I was a bit confused at the end until I read the previous review - then was kind of disappointed. Desite any of that I was still really scared, it was very compelling, and it's of good quality.

Good work.

nice plot twist

graphics-photoshoped so i dont think this catagory aplies even though you did use filters

style/story-great
FORSHADOWING-the unrealistic sentencing by judge and the photo of a dead MAN all were great forshadowing tools
TWIST-hes was in a coma OMG. Though if you had spent some more time with the man before he is killed, the story could had been better

sound-was ok

violence-i will count the pictures of dead people as violence

Previews-awsome!!!

The inclusion of downtown San Diego-puzzling

You can refer to my reviews to your other movies..

For what I think of your skill (read: lack thereof) with flash. However I must commend you and offer congratulations for having the self security about your body to put a picture of yourself on the computer in the first preview in this dog shit movie.

DPI-DeAdMaN responds:

LOL I just upped your rating on the scale of Fagness up to an 11 why because you had nothing more to do in your pathetic life but to dog other peoples work because i blammed your piece of shit. I wonder why yours is not online and why mine is Oh and I bet you aint registered because um YOUR ACCOUNT probably got deleted because you suck
Eat shit and die fagboy rot in hell
LOL sad thing is if you met me id knock those three teeth you had so far down the back of your throat that you'd be shitting Gingivitis for weeks

ok

not bad movie, but that picture of that naked fat guy is gross.

DPI-DeAdMaN responds:

Again you must think about it though. The whole concept on the fat guy is to ask you a question and that is.....Do you know who your children are talking too or if you dont have kids do you know who you chat with. Just because they say they are someone doesn't mean they are. Thats the whole point behind that.

hahaha

that was hilarious, just work a little bit more on it and it will rock haha the man in the computer was great hahaha.

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Sep 16, 2004
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