OMG!!!!!!! my first award i didn't even realise until now (10 october)
thanks to all the reviews
originally i was only going to put it on deviant art but i was convinced to put it on Newground by Sioux, thanks to all the people that have seen it already and gave a positive response.
Sorry if you think it is short but it only took me 3 days and i only really intented it to be on deviant art, oh well