I thought it was pretty funny
I'm pretty sure if your going to have sprites doing eachother and cramming babies up their asses, you apparently AREN"T following the character's bio's completely. Don't know why people complaining so much.
That intro was stupid as hell and I could only read like 3/5 of it cause it kept flashing on and off and I'd lose my place. That text-pop-up sound was fine, but possibly find a less annoying one (if you cant, the one you have will do).