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was hard make the lights and shadows, but it give life to the movie.

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meh

I just got the impression you were to lazy to make a connecting story so you jsut broke it apart into fragments, so it could have been better.

good stuff

i really like the concept of the movie, its very origional, and good fun to watch. the presence of robots instead of humans is good, because it just makes the story line a whole lot more interesting.
the graphics were pretty good, i liked all of the drawings of the different robots.
the animation was pretty cool. although there wasnt too much, it was quite nice.
the sound was very good, as there was a lot of music in the movie with great sound effects to go with the movie.
but i could tell that English is not your first language, as the movie was riddles with spelling errors... not to worry, it was still easy to figure out what was going on.
Overall, a very good movie. the concept is good, and i will enjoy looking out for and watching the second part to it. good stuff.
overall score: 7/10
(THE THUMB: UP!!)

light-of-darkness responds:

I am glad to know it.
the error was fix.
you are right about my first linguage
I am speak portugues (Brazil)

I'm not being an asshole

Here are the corrected words from your movie. You can fix them and re-submit, if you want to.

How did it happen?
Searching for other flashbacks.
He will be the future life form for humans.
Trust me.
Only I am awake.
Why are the others like me not awake?
I need to know.

If you need any help with the english in future movies, you can email me. PaveTheOceans at gmail dot com

light-of-darkness responds:

thank you very much
I will make it

Great for a first movie

Keep it up, I expect to see more from you. I liked how nice and orginial this movie was. It would be great to see more movies like this from you.

But PLEASE give auido portal credits to the songs you used (I for sure noticed one was from the AP, its driving me nuts trying to figure out what it is) Those artists worked very hard to bring you those songs, and the least you can do is give them a little credit.

light-of-darkness responds:

Thank you
and sorry about the credits
next time I will give the credits

The story's the important part

You told a good story here. I can see you have a good understanding of story elements, as you recounted this robot's story through pieced-together flashbacks.

The problem is that the graphics are a bit simple and sterile, though you did include some very interesting angles.

It's all-in-all still a very good flash movie.

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2,651
Votes
15
Score
3.95 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 12, 2004
9:36 PM EDT