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Doug + Pauls Mighty Adv.

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It runs slow on the net, so some mouth/voice stuff may be out of time. OK i kno the cartoon isnt that mighty but me and my mate had to think of a name for this so it was called this. this has a faster frame rate then my previous movies mate and i also have a mate helping out aswell

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Are you a whore or something?

So many mates. Do you know what mating is? You brits have a funny way of showing friendship. Anyway, you and your sex slave need to work on your voice acting a bit. Your animation is kind of bad, but your characters are horribly drawn. You might be able to get away with the faces as being your style if you improve the body a little and become really good at animating them. I wish I could shit on you, but your homosexual lovers (also referred to as "mates") probably do that anyway. Make sure you stream your audio files, that might help with them coming unsynchronized. And come up with a plot, a good plot, and then start adding jokes to it. Don't try to add plot to jokes.

((( ROFFL )))

Your characters need some refining more shape is needed to them, and the voices could be somewhat better aswell, it was funny some of the stuff that was going on, but also could use more story and more adventure meaning more scenes and other characters in the movies aswell, anyways it was decent....

~X~

Nope.

The animation and mic work was very poor, and the concept and humor left much to be desired. If there's a specific style that's being sought after, it needs to be retooled.

Nice job

Truenuff quit jawing for you don't have a site.
At least not one that is accesible.
Now back to the review. Not great for I have seen better but I have seen far worse.The eyes were a little too big for my liking but the concept for random humor is nice and well thought so just keep at the level you are at or hone your skills for it ain't bad but it ain't great.

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Your characters are very similar to those of metal mavericks. Just a thought, check out his site to see.

~TrueNuff Studios~

futterp666 responds:

oh yeh

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Uploaded
Sep 10, 2004
6:58 PM EDT