Good
Decent work my man keep it up.
Author Comments
PLEASE READ:
Hi Newgrounds! Well, I have been busy lately, with school and soccer practice, so I'm probably not going to be on Newgrounds a lot, at least not now. Anyway, this was one of my first movies (went through serious editing- yes, the ring is SUPPOSED to follow the mouse, by the way). It made it on an unaffiliated website, so I was thinking...it should make it here on Newgrounds, considering it's not a stick flash or a "chick quiz" game (the new phenomenon (?)). As always, please vote fairly and honestly, and maybe leave a review- I would appreciate it. Thanks in advance!!!!
What can i say...
I mean, it has good plot, good outline, good concept, but it leaves a lot to be desired.
The training bit was a bit...pointless, so to say. The falling monitor was... a bit farfetched i.e. Where the fuck did that come from. How sonic got intouch with his son was also farfetched. To save a long review, a lot of it was farfetched. Also, the sprites didn't move smoothly and were a bit all over the place.
All in all, it has the potential to be a great success. Just keep practicing.
~Summers
P.S. I have flashes, so dont use that to your defense. I just don't have any on Newgrounds, as, I admit, i deem my flashes too poorly done to submit them here. Plus there are n00bs here who will blam it and write bad reviews >.>
basic
very basic i wouldent watch again
kool
that was really kool man. It was not radom or gay just really kool. Thanks this made my day happy.
P.S. where is the second one?
((( NOTBAD )))
Well notbad, im always saying something about size and all, and this flash is up there with a high file size, just something to work on for the users who use 56k, as for the flash notbad, could use abit more detail and some fresher look to it but its cool, i was impressed with some of the elements but still lacked in others, art was ok but could be improved, anyways good luck on your next one...
~X~