T_T that was so sad
you almost made me cry... it was so said.. and I felt so sorry for that guy and her 2...
maybe the pixs aren't best quality BUT the storyline was good :D
"knowing that he could not have me DRIVED him crazy"
drove, not drived.
The story really held my interest. Good job!
Can you say, "Writer?"
My god are you an amazing writer! You could make MILLIONS if this was a movie!
wow........ very....... very moving..... yeah... good job. I need to take a few moments to think about what i just saw.